Take 3

Sorry folks it's been a while since my last post!I's quite stuck with crap stuff that's happening in my life for sometime now!Now that I'm back,I hope to make more posts more often!This one is a rhyme,which I wrote today thinking about our lives and its problems basically!I know life sometime's a bitch,but it's you only who let it be so!I haven't named it yet though,but any suggestions are duly welcome!!!!
Dedication part......hmmmmm....lemme think.......okay.....this poem is dedicated to YOU!!!!!!!






Why you always crave for more?
Thinking this,has left me sore!
Happiness can't be found in any store,
Then why you run behind those crores!!
Now take a glance at your inner-core,
While I tell you this folklore!

I see a lot of beauty around,
But it tends to loose its ground!
Your whole life,you remain astound;
Never realising,what you've already found!
Your life might've been a beautiful sound,
If hadn't you mind,for once be clowned!!

Why you always,need to be right?
Why you always,wanna have a fight?
These are questions which don't have any light;
Till you free yourself from your inner-fright!
Then loosing,will no more be a plight;
And you might,even become your own knight!

Now war is waged in having everything;
Gored are those,who miss something;
But more,more,more;risks only one thing;
Your aim in life,might end up being nothing!
So,life will never seem a deuce,
If only you knew,how to loose!!

Then,why you always need to win?
It won't make your intuitions clean;
Agelong,you'll just fly and fly,
Just to find,you've noone with to cry!
Believe me,it's not a lie,
You'll find it,when you die!!

My life never looked,this beautiful,
Everything around,now seems so peaceful;
I think,I now make my stars rule;
And even I find myself cool!
But these thoughts came to my pool,
Only after I found,I'm a big fool!!!




From my previous posts I've been criticised of being too much love centric and overtly emotional!This time I've tried my best to tone it down! I hope you folks like it;Any kind of comments are welcome!
Atlast I want to sign-off stating a line from a beautiful song,I've been humming these days!Actually this song's been a kind of inspiration for me!

"Amake amar moto thakte dao,aami nijeke nijer moto ghuchiye niyechi
Ja chilona chilona se naa paaoi thak,sob pele nosto jibon."

Non bangu folks,grab a translator!!!:P