hello friends........
with new year comes new resolutions nd new aspirations!2011 has arrived nd i'm happy to tell you people i've finally decided to quit writing poems after this one!thanx 4 tolerating me 4 d last 8-9 months!
This is my last poem its in Bengali...bt dun worry,u can surely give it a try!
This last poem is again dedicated to Jude!though I've named her Smriti here to give a Bengali touch to my poem!
actually Jude er saathe kotha bola amar jibon e ekta sundor smriti hoye theke jaabe, tai ekhane Jude er naam Smriti.aami eto din Jude k niye j eto hoi holla korlam,aasole Jude konodin e amar jibon e aasini.kintu kichu sesh kotha bolar khub ichee chilo tai ei kobita ta college phirei 1 din raate neshai bibhor hoye likhechilam.keno ki eta notun bochor e likhechilam tai etar naam HAPPY NEW YEAR
Happy New Year
Smriti,I'm writing this letter to you
Sitting in a shitty room & its 4:22
Outside its cold;still its really very dark
And my corridor is empty,with no dog now to bark!
Ekhun ichee korche jaante amar,bhabche ki tomar mon
R sudhui ba raagcho kano,aami jaayi kori ekhun!
Tai kaapte kaapte bolchi abar,what that 'Hi' meant to me
R neshar ghor e likhe phelchi,ei sesh poetry
Bhebe bhebeo bujhina aami,why you always hate this
Sudhu jaani etuku ekhun,sob kichui hobe freeze
Dekho Smriti aajke aami:r thakte paarlam na please
Jodio jaani bhalo kore,you don't like all these
Now I'm happy:I'm doing this 'favour' to you
Till now you talked,it's so nice of you
I never wished,to be some 'problem' for you
So,I'm Sorry:I misused the niceness of you!!
Dekho aami jaani,aami chelete boddo mota mushy
Aami sudhu likhe berai,kaabyo aamar jaa khusi
Tobuo Smriti someday again,long down the line
Konodin somoi pele,do read,these poetry of mine
Bodhoi bujhbe tokhun tumi,ei kobita gulo dekhe
Likhechilam sobkichui,ekdum moner bhetor theke
Ichee chilo likhte ekta maane waala gaan
Ichee chilo bolte onek goppo taan taan
Ichee gulo sob bolte gele,whiskey te korte hobe snaan
Neshar saathe joriye jaabe,tokhun sob kichu j aapraan
Tai Smriti aamai aaj,bolte hobe ebar tata
Jaani ei kobitar,chilonai kono maatha
Jawar aage sudhu bole jaai,Oh Smriti Dear!
Just wanted to wish,A Belated Happy New Year!!
So my Idiot's Take ends here!After reading all these,guys u must be pretty sure now,how big an idiot i'm!!!!Still u folks out dere Have a great nd beautiful life ahead!nd u too Jude....u shud've d bestest nd beautifullest life ahead!!GoodBye!
An Idiot's Take!
Thursday, January 6, 2011
Thursday, December 9, 2010
Take 7
Hello again,this's supposed to be my first post about Jude!Infact I'd posted it,then deleted it,now again reposting it!!!!Its me Jude.............indecisive yet passionate!Jude,it's d reason y I like to irritate u everyday!U dnt give a crap to dis,But i really do......as You know,I'm overtly nd foolishly sentimental,which you call,being 'mushy'!ya,i know my vocab is not dat gr8 nd yet i do write blogs!!! :O
still,Jude dis one was the first for you,so i treasure it a lot!!!!!!
I've titled it as 'Jude65@gmail.com'
Jude65@gmail.com
I liked to talk to her,
But did she like to hear me!
I thought,I knew her,
But did she try to know me!
Her name was jude65@gmail.com;
This only I knew,as standard norm!
Though I tried;
I never gave her a ring;
As all I did,was only ping;
She used to say,
I speak only crap;
But did she know;
This was the way,I wrap!
As words were then,
Very difficult to come;
And whatever came,
Only proved me more dumb!
One day she said,'Don't,hit on me!'
I told her,'No,I'm not!'
But ever if she say,'Don't talk to me!'
I never to say,'No,I'm not!'
Oh Lady!
Don't make any more trouble;
Just say some crap & blow this like a bubble;
For me;
Hi is the only word,to say;
I hope,it's not a crime!
For that;
I scribbled some words here,to play;
Tell me,do they actually rhyme?
I can't express myself better than this!This is my only language,as i'm very shy.....shit again speaking crap!
anyways just wanna say......watever leave....bye!!!!
still,Jude dis one was the first for you,so i treasure it a lot!!!!!!
I've titled it as 'Jude65@gmail.com'
Jude65@gmail.com
I liked to talk to her,
But did she like to hear me!
I thought,I knew her,
But did she try to know me!
Her name was jude65@gmail.com;
This only I knew,as standard norm!
Though I tried;
I never gave her a ring;
As all I did,was only ping;
She used to say,
I speak only crap;
But did she know;
This was the way,I wrap!
As words were then,
Very difficult to come;
And whatever came,
Only proved me more dumb!
One day she said,'Don't,hit on me!'
I told her,'No,I'm not!'
But ever if she say,'Don't talk to me!'
I never to say,'No,I'm not!'
Oh Lady!
Don't make any more trouble;
Just say some crap & blow this like a bubble;
For me;
Hi is the only word,to say;
I hope,it's not a crime!
For that;
I scribbled some words here,to play;
Tell me,do they actually rhyme?
I can't express myself better than this!This is my only language,as i'm very shy.....shit again speaking crap!
anyways just wanna say......watever leave....bye!!!!
Wednesday, December 8, 2010
Take 6
This is short poem I've written for Jude again.....this time I've been inspired by Pink Floyd's song 'Hey You'.....believe me....dats d two words i copied from them....rest is mine!!!!
I've titled it 'HEY YOU'
hey you
hey you,
when i look at you!
i see a confidence,
whole lotta new!
hey you,
there's no cliche about you!
everything you say,
can be said,only by you!
hey you;
time rolls on,just like you;
but,my NP-hard problem,
will always be you!
no,i'm not lying:atleast,not to you;
maybe someday,i'll again see you!
then,i'll say:
hey you!
still those eyes of you,
has not lost its sheen!
still that smile of you,
has not missed its gleam!
hey you!
for me;
it's only,you,you & you!
but alas;
whatever i say:only irritates you!
i know,it's not my day;
but someday,it might be mine!
when i might be,your 'someday guy';
filling your somedays,with my time!
hey you,
where are you!
i've nothing to lie,
i've noone to cry,
oh yeah;
i'm totally fine!
as i've these words,
and these are truely mine!!
For Non CS people:::
NB:::NP-hard----->Its a kind of problem whose solution can't be found in polynomial time!!!!!!
No comments are welcome in this blog........if u have any though u can drop it in my mail or just ping me!!!!:P
Thank You!!!!
I've titled it 'HEY YOU'
hey you
hey you,
when i look at you!
i see a confidence,
whole lotta new!
hey you,
there's no cliche about you!
everything you say,
can be said,only by you!
hey you;
time rolls on,just like you;
but,my NP-hard problem,
will always be you!
no,i'm not lying:atleast,not to you;
maybe someday,i'll again see you!
then,i'll say:
hey you!
still those eyes of you,
has not lost its sheen!
still that smile of you,
has not missed its gleam!
hey you!
for me;
it's only,you,you & you!
but alas;
whatever i say:only irritates you!
i know,it's not my day;
but someday,it might be mine!
when i might be,your 'someday guy';
filling your somedays,with my time!
hey you,
where are you!
i've nothing to lie,
i've noone to cry,
oh yeah;
i'm totally fine!
as i've these words,
and these are truely mine!!
For Non CS people:::
NB:::NP-hard----->Its a kind of problem whose solution can't be found in polynomial time!!!!!!
No comments are welcome in this blog........if u have any though u can drop it in my mail or just ping me!!!!:P
Thank You!!!!
Wednesday, December 1, 2010
Take 5
This is a short poem I've written for Jude!Inspired from the famous Beatles song,
'Hey Jude....Dnt make it bad....Take a sad song....nd make it better'
I've titled it as MUSHY SUSHI
MUSHY SUSHI
Long long time ago,
I looked at you!
Atlast when I talked;
Only wanted to say you;
Jude!
I like you,
I knew you wouldn't!
I tried not to like you,
Alas,still I couldn't!
Jude!
Just add me in any of your sushi,
Good! I'll surely feel;
I'm a joke,so you call me mushy,
Bad! I surely don't feel;
Jude,
I like to know you,
My reasons seem really crude!
Jude,
I like to like you,
So,Please!Don't be rude;
Why you say 'things will fade'
Why I say 'it's not very late'
Infact why you'd to ask that 'why'?
You know,I can't ever lie!
Is it because,you wanted a final goodbye?
No no,please don't now lie!
Hey!
Have this last thing to say!
It's really been long,
Since I last said an Hi!
But,I'm not yet that strong,
To say that final Goodbye!!
Thank You!!!
'Hey Jude....Dnt make it bad....Take a sad song....nd make it better'
I've titled it as MUSHY SUSHI
MUSHY SUSHI
Long long time ago,
I looked at you!
Atlast when I talked;
Only wanted to say you;
Jude!
I like you,
I knew you wouldn't!
I tried not to like you,
Alas,still I couldn't!
Jude!
Just add me in any of your sushi,
Good! I'll surely feel;
I'm a joke,so you call me mushy,
Bad! I surely don't feel;
Jude,
I like to know you,
My reasons seem really crude!
Jude,
I like to like you,
So,Please!Don't be rude;
Why you say 'things will fade'
Why I say 'it's not very late'
Infact why you'd to ask that 'why'?
You know,I can't ever lie!
Is it because,you wanted a final goodbye?
No no,please don't now lie!
Hey!
Have this last thing to say!
It's really been long,
Since I last said an Hi!
But,I'm not yet that strong,
To say that final Goodbye!!
Thank You!!!
Friday, October 29, 2010
Take 4
Hello friends,thanx 4 bearing me....taking all my crappy shit nd stuffs......I know I'm one of the biggest jackass you can ever come across.......So, this poem is dedicated to me and YOU!!!!!
ISLAND MAN
I believe that you hear me;
Though I never get to hear you!
I know that you're not my friend;
But,I'll never befriend you!
How many more years to yearn?
Before you see that I really grew!
I know that there is still some light;
But it's still not early to say,its night!
Slowly slowly,my time's washing away,
Atleast I believe,my future's not that far away!
Though I don't see any phoenix coming up yet,
But I pray that it atleast,won't be that late!
Hey,Joanne,Will you be my nightangle?
Sing to me a song,I'm dying to hear for long;
For long,I've been blowing my own futile horn;
Though it never gave me shelter,from my own thorn!
No,I don't want to break,like a little girl!
So,Ilene,come visit me in my jail;
After that,we'll just set our own sail;
And permissions won't we need,from any kind of grail!
Alas,Joanne never sang me any song;
Then,Ilene also took,really long;
Likewise,Cathy is never there to take;
And I know,Lousie will also be a big fake!
But still I continue to be in my own lake,
Without sailing to the seas,just for everyone's sake!
There're days when I wonder,why my life's so skew;
People surround me,yet they seem so few;
Yes,my friend,that's the way I grew;
So many chapters,yet nothing seems that new!
Why you always find me,easy to humiliate to?
Anything about me,seems fancy to make fun to!
These are things,I seldom cared to look to;
Until a question came up & I kept wondering to,
Really,Is there nowhere I'm going to?
No no,it's just;
I'm revealing myself too much,to you people to!!
Atlast I want to sign-off quoting one of the most beautiful lines from Bob Dylon from one of his songs....
"I wanted to give my heart but she wanted my soul..
Don't think twice,it's alright!"
ISLAND MAN
I believe that you hear me;
Though I never get to hear you!
I know that you're not my friend;
But,I'll never befriend you!
How many more years to yearn?
Before you see that I really grew!
I know that there is still some light;
But it's still not early to say,its night!
Slowly slowly,my time's washing away,
Atleast I believe,my future's not that far away!
Though I don't see any phoenix coming up yet,
But I pray that it atleast,won't be that late!
Hey,Joanne,Will you be my nightangle?
Sing to me a song,I'm dying to hear for long;
For long,I've been blowing my own futile horn;
Though it never gave me shelter,from my own thorn!
No,I don't want to break,like a little girl!
So,Ilene,come visit me in my jail;
After that,we'll just set our own sail;
And permissions won't we need,from any kind of grail!
Alas,Joanne never sang me any song;
Then,Ilene also took,really long;
Likewise,Cathy is never there to take;
And I know,Lousie will also be a big fake!
But still I continue to be in my own lake,
Without sailing to the seas,just for everyone's sake!
There're days when I wonder,why my life's so skew;
People surround me,yet they seem so few;
Yes,my friend,that's the way I grew;
So many chapters,yet nothing seems that new!
Why you always find me,easy to humiliate to?
Anything about me,seems fancy to make fun to!
These are things,I seldom cared to look to;
Until a question came up & I kept wondering to,
Really,Is there nowhere I'm going to?
No no,it's just;
I'm revealing myself too much,to you people to!!
Atlast I want to sign-off quoting one of the most beautiful lines from Bob Dylon from one of his songs....
"I wanted to give my heart but she wanted my soul..
Don't think twice,it's alright!"
Friday, October 22, 2010
Take 3
Sorry folks it's been a while since my last post!I's quite stuck with crap stuff that's happening in my life for sometime now!Now that I'm back,I hope to make more posts more often!This one is a rhyme,which I wrote today thinking about our lives and its problems basically!I know life sometime's a bitch,but it's you only who let it be so!I haven't named it yet though,but any suggestions are duly welcome!!!!
Dedication part......hmmmmm....lemme think.......okay.....this poem is dedicated to YOU!!!!!!!
Why you always crave for more?
Thinking this,has left me sore!
Happiness can't be found in any store,
Then why you run behind those crores!!
Now take a glance at your inner-core,
While I tell you this folklore!
I see a lot of beauty around,
But it tends to loose its ground!
Your whole life,you remain astound;
Never realising,what you've already found!
Your life might've been a beautiful sound,
If hadn't you mind,for once be clowned!!
Why you always,need to be right?
Why you always,wanna have a fight?
These are questions which don't have any light;
Till you free yourself from your inner-fright!
Then loosing,will no more be a plight;
And you might,even become your own knight!
Now war is waged in having everything;
Gored are those,who miss something;
But more,more,more;risks only one thing;
Your aim in life,might end up being nothing!
So,life will never seem a deuce,
If only you knew,how to loose!!
Then,why you always need to win?
It won't make your intuitions clean;
Agelong,you'll just fly and fly,
Just to find,you've noone with to cry!
Believe me,it's not a lie,
You'll find it,when you die!!
My life never looked,this beautiful,
Everything around,now seems so peaceful;
I think,I now make my stars rule;
And even I find myself cool!
But these thoughts came to my pool,
Only after I found,I'm a big fool!!!
From my previous posts I've been criticised of being too much love centric and overtly emotional!This time I've tried my best to tone it down! I hope you folks like it;Any kind of comments are welcome!
Atlast I want to sign-off stating a line from a beautiful song,I've been humming these days!Actually this song's been a kind of inspiration for me!
"Amake amar moto thakte dao,aami nijeke nijer moto ghuchiye niyechi
Ja chilona chilona se naa paaoi thak,sob pele nosto jibon."
Non bangu folks,grab a translator!!!:P
Dedication part......hmmmmm....lemme think.......okay.....this poem is dedicated to YOU!!!!!!!
Why you always crave for more?
Thinking this,has left me sore!
Happiness can't be found in any store,
Then why you run behind those crores!!
Now take a glance at your inner-core,
While I tell you this folklore!
I see a lot of beauty around,
But it tends to loose its ground!
Your whole life,you remain astound;
Never realising,what you've already found!
Your life might've been a beautiful sound,
If hadn't you mind,for once be clowned!!
Why you always,need to be right?
Why you always,wanna have a fight?
These are questions which don't have any light;
Till you free yourself from your inner-fright!
Then loosing,will no more be a plight;
And you might,even become your own knight!
Now war is waged in having everything;
Gored are those,who miss something;
But more,more,more;risks only one thing;
Your aim in life,might end up being nothing!
So,life will never seem a deuce,
If only you knew,how to loose!!
Then,why you always need to win?
It won't make your intuitions clean;
Agelong,you'll just fly and fly,
Just to find,you've noone with to cry!
Believe me,it's not a lie,
You'll find it,when you die!!
My life never looked,this beautiful,
Everything around,now seems so peaceful;
I think,I now make my stars rule;
And even I find myself cool!
But these thoughts came to my pool,
Only after I found,I'm a big fool!!!
From my previous posts I've been criticised of being too much love centric and overtly emotional!This time I've tried my best to tone it down! I hope you folks like it;Any kind of comments are welcome!
Atlast I want to sign-off stating a line from a beautiful song,I've been humming these days!Actually this song's been a kind of inspiration for me!
"Amake amar moto thakte dao,aami nijeke nijer moto ghuchiye niyechi
Ja chilona chilona se naa paaoi thak,sob pele nosto jibon."
Non bangu folks,grab a translator!!!:P
Tuesday, June 8, 2010
Take 2
LOVE BIOPSY
Endless nights,listless cries,
Too many songs,all full of lies;
Rum Whiskey all seemed then nice,
But all I wished ,someday I might again rise!
Nicotine came to my life for this reason,
Now I remember,it's an awful season,
As I couldn't take anymore of that crap,
I just wished to crawl back to nature's lap!
Always hoped,someday you'll take my hand,
Together we'd move to long godforsaken land,
Our dreams would turn back their sands of time,
Without which my life just seemed an unforgiven crime!
But days passed,hours went by,
You never turned back to say me a Hi!
Is it because,I grew up in a rye?
Or else you're just afraid of flying high in the sky!!!
Your loss,now has to be someone else's gain,
Then why to bear all this useless pain?
Love someday will again surely rain,
But this time,I won't let it be flushed out of the drain!!!
Love struck once,might leave you frost-bitten,
But don't let it keep you,forever smitten.
Every phoenix some day's to rise from its ashes,
Leaving all signs of its damn past rashes!
Now I know,music of love's there forever,
But,players like me, then knew it never ;
They say,love took me to utter insanity,
But in this way,I finally saw god's own charity!!!
Though I've titled it as Love-Biopsy,I's long obsessed with the title Love-Autopsy!But then I realized that my love never died.Actually,no love can ever die.It's like all things living and breathing in life;it ebbs & flows,but never quits!A heart void of love is not worthy of beating at all.
Most importantly,this rhyme is not dedicated to any special soneone!Any comments regarding that is surely not welcome.
It is infact,the LOVE BALLAD of every man whose heart beats & is worthy of love.It's just my adaptation of this eternal Love Ballad based on my life experiences.It's just yet another simple rhyme joining the long list of Love Ballads u find by googling on net!
So,don't call me a poet.Just remember Plato's words:::
'At the touch of Love every one becomes a poet'
You may also try and you never know!!!!!!!
Endless nights,listless cries,
Too many songs,all full of lies;
Rum Whiskey all seemed then nice,
But all I wished ,someday I might again rise!
Nicotine came to my life for this reason,
Now I remember,it's an awful season,
As I couldn't take anymore of that crap,
I just wished to crawl back to nature's lap!
Always hoped,someday you'll take my hand,
Together we'd move to long godforsaken land,
Our dreams would turn back their sands of time,
Without which my life just seemed an unforgiven crime!
But days passed,hours went by,
You never turned back to say me a Hi!
Is it because,I grew up in a rye?
Or else you're just afraid of flying high in the sky!!!
Your loss,now has to be someone else's gain,
Then why to bear all this useless pain?
Love someday will again surely rain,
But this time,I won't let it be flushed out of the drain!!!
Love struck once,might leave you frost-bitten,
But don't let it keep you,forever smitten.
Every phoenix some day's to rise from its ashes,
Leaving all signs of its damn past rashes!
Now I know,music of love's there forever,
But,players like me, then knew it never ;
They say,love took me to utter insanity,
But in this way,I finally saw god's own charity!!!
Though I've titled it as Love-Biopsy,I's long obsessed with the title Love-Autopsy!But then I realized that my love never died.Actually,no love can ever die.It's like all things living and breathing in life;it ebbs & flows,but never quits!A heart void of love is not worthy of beating at all.
Most importantly,this rhyme is not dedicated to any special soneone!Any comments regarding that is surely not welcome.
It is infact,the LOVE BALLAD of every man whose heart beats & is worthy of love.It's just my adaptation of this eternal Love Ballad based on my life experiences.It's just yet another simple rhyme joining the long list of Love Ballads u find by googling on net!
So,don't call me a poet.Just remember Plato's words:::
'At the touch of Love every one becomes a poet'
You may also try and you never know!!!!!!!
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